Whilst editing we found that our documentary really lacked the form of a journey. As i have posted before, we watched over our current first edit of our documentary. We found that it didn't really flow without the voice over that we planned to add in later.
It occurred to us that the voice over would definitely help to establish the story and help the viewer to make sense of what is going on. At the moment, there is no sense of journey which is what we need to work on.
Today, we began to draft a few questions that we would ask whilst watching the documentary. This will help us to establish the basic script for the story line.
For our first minute here are a few questions we drafted:
These questions will help us establish the voice over and journey of our film.
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